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PostSubject: Naiya Clan   Mon Apr 26, 2010 2:33 pm

Kekei genki, ability's or styles.: The Eagle Eye is the doujutsu of the
Naiya Clan. The Naiya Clan prides itself on being "as fast as the wind", that is why with each stage of the doujutsu unlocked the user gets a little faster. They are masters at the Fuuton element which they use not just for attacking but for enhacing their own abilities as well.

Element: Wind

Dress: No special attire, just the ninja uniform of their village.

Traditions: Clan members wear their headbands over their eyes to simulate blindess in order to train for use of the final stage of their bloodline. The naiya clan follows their own special form of bushido.

Clan history: The naiya clan was rose to during 5th ninja war in sunagakure in order to maximize their fighting so the village wouldnt be overrun during the war. Sadly though, they were still defeated in the end. Most of the clan were lost in the war but a small group of them left sungakure before it got taken over by nyu-konohagakure. The clan lived in a remote piece of land in the border between nyu-konohagakure and the N.E.S. until they were forced to move into the south empire.

Kekei Genkai Information:
Unlockable at genin level. Stage 1: Eyes turn from blue to yellow with no pupil. Speed doubles and user gains slight control over wind element. He can create small breezes without handsigns but nothing like whirlwinds.

Unlockable at chunin stage. Stage 2: Yellow eye develops triangle pupil. Wind control increases, user can create gusts of wind and small tornados. User's sight decreases, vision is foggy but all other senses increase, allowing the user to sense their opponent's movement up 50m to their body.

Unlockable at jounin level. Stage 3: Eyes turn completely black and develop a compass in the middle of the eyes. User loses sight completely, all other senses increase greatly, allowing the user to clearly sense enemy movement up to 250 m from their body. Sight diminshes with each use and chakra is steadily drained, making this stage a last resort.

Sacred artifact or weapon: The Divine Eagle Sword is the legendary blade held by the First Eagle clan member. It is the ultimate sword of the Clan. It is made from unknown metal mixture, which makes it unbreakable by most metals.


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PostSubject: Re: Naiya Clan   Mon Apr 26, 2010 4:47 pm

I have mixed feelings about this clan, Mostly because this is basically just an exact copy of both sharingan and byakugan. Even the name bya-ringan. All in all there's no real creativity in it except for the gene splicing so I would have to say

Dissaproved unless said otherwise

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PostSubject: Re: Naiya Clan   Mon Apr 26, 2010 5:32 pm

Okay, Like Chris put it.
Unoriginal.
Trust me we don't need that.
I second the disapproval for a few reasons.
None of which really matter.
Come back with something original and we will talk.
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PostSubject: Re: Naiya Clan   Wed Apr 28, 2010 4:25 am

here's my new clan
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PostSubject: Re: Naiya Clan   Wed Apr 28, 2010 9:16 am

I approve - have Konton look at it.

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PostSubject: Re: Naiya Clan   Wed Apr 28, 2010 5:25 pm

Clan looks good not to much to complain about. How ever.
I do have to problems. The solid black eyes with the compass. As you may or may not know the Akan of the Kumori turns the users eyes a solid black. I just think maybe this should be changed to stop confusion in the future.
Finally the increased speed.
The doujutsu seems iffy.
Not that it is a bad idea. But the increase and speed as a clan trait is what makes this such a problem to me. Honestly in the works I have a clan that will be based on speed. But only for certain jutsu and their element chakra will be none existent in order to give a restriction.
With you're clan I would drop the speed and the - eye sight due to the clan not being push the limit god moddish and focus on wind element.

I'm going to have to disapprove on the accounts of the speed increases.
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PostSubject: Re: Naiya Clan   Wed Apr 28, 2010 9:03 pm

I approve of this. The only problem I have just like Konton said is the speed increases. Maybe if you could put a limit to how fast because if you were to be in a fight and in every post you have your going to say "Because of my kekkei genkai I was too fast to be caught" then thats gonna be a problem.

Again just put a limit to how fast the clans members are and how much faster they get after each level. If It isn't gonna cheat other members of a fight then I'll approve

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PostSubject: Re: Naiya Clan   Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:16 pm

edited, i took outthe speed increases, it was just an idea i thought i try out
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PostSubject: Re: Naiya Clan   Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:26 pm

Approved unless said otherwise

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PostSubject: Re: Naiya Clan   Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:28 pm

Btw just saying but since you made a new clan you might want to edit your char creation as well
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PostSubject: Re: Naiya Clan   Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:31 pm

yeah what he said

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PostSubject: Re: Naiya Clan   Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:37 pm

naruhi was already changed for the naiya clan
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PostSubject: Re: Naiya Clan   Thu Apr 29, 2010 7:53 am

I also approve this clan. A Section For it will be created later on Welcome to Naruto Tenshoku enjoy your stay.
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PostSubject: Re: Naiya Clan   Thu Apr 29, 2010 2:09 pm

thank u very much
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