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PostSubject: [ Takayasu ]   Fri Apr 23, 2010 3:52 pm

Kekei genki:

Primary ability:

Takaugan (Look at my avatar right eye)
The ability of chakra THE TAKAUGAN!

The Ability to Radiate and Control their chakra
The ability to sense other chakra such as animal chakra, living creatures chakra and other shinobi chakra.
The ability to sense precise people and certain clans chakra.
This allows them to see the internal
chakra circulation system in other beings. This vision also grants the
member a near 360° view of their surroundings. The higher the skill of
the clan member, the further the distance from which they can sense
incoming attacks.

The ability to store and increase chakra
The ability to draw the chakra in a specific
area to a single point (and move it)
The controlling ability of the chakra is like having a powerful
dominant specialty in Chakra Control - It also has the added bonus of
being able to quicken handsigns at the cost of using more chakra, but as
few Takayasu members rely on speed, this ability is hardly ever used,
other than extreme emergencies.
With this great ability to control chakra its also consumes quite alot of the user's chakra thus this flaw was fixed by the Grand Takayasu.
Yasutaka: Precious Peace is learned after achieving the blue Takaugan. The user absorbs everything's chakra within the distance of 5m. Once activated the user is slown down to the point his barely able to move.With such a large amount of chakra collected after 5 posts the user's increases by 3. Chakra control is max cpable of punching a hole through anything.

Secondry Ability:
Not just being great at chakra control the Takayasu also have Fuuton jutsu skills. Giving them the ability to use Fuuton jutsu without handseals.Addiontally be able to control the wind without handseals the can control the wind direction. Being capable of hearing whats in the wind.

Element:
Wind

Dress:

Takayasu armband and Takayasu flak jacket

Traditions:

Birth to Takaugan
When any member reachs the rank of genin. They have the ability to unlock their true potiental. The Grand Takayasu(Leader) or Elder Takayasu (Second man) bloods is drawn and poured into the Cup of Takayasu.With the sword of Takayasu. Held upwards and dipped into the cup. The Genin makes the promise of "Takayasu"
'I swear to become a great ninja. I swear i will use my abilities for the better. I owe my soul to death if i giveaway the secrets of Takayasu.
I AM A TAKAYASU!' Thus the sword is cut across the right eye. The Grand Takayasu steps forwards and uses Hidden Jutsu:Activation.
The genin is unable to use that eye for 7 days.


Clan history:
Takayasu clan on consists of one member currently seeking to create and great family and end the war even if it had to cost him his life.The first Grand Takayasu studied many clans and decided to put unique techniques together. Knowing that during this time of war clans were being exterminated by the Uchiha and Akatsuki. He knew it was vital to create this clan.


Sacred artifact or weapon:[
Artifacts
-Ring of the Grand Takayasu
Ring that states that the holder is the leader of the clan granting him acces to the white Takaugan. If holder is found with impure chakra or not of Takayasu blood the ring will reject the holder ending up paralayzed for 1 day.
-Cup of Takayasu
-Sword of Takayasu
This sword is purely based with chakra to be able to create the great Seal of Takayasu
-Sycthe of Takayasu
-Grand Takayasu Sycthe.





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PostSubject: Re: [ Takayasu ]   Fri Apr 23, 2010 8:51 pm

Approved 1/2. Have one other Admin approve this and it's good to go.

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PostSubject: Re: [ Takayasu ]   Sat Apr 24, 2010 12:48 pm

Thank you!
Step closer to world domination..

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PostSubject: Re: [ Takayasu ]   Sat Apr 24, 2010 2:05 pm

Well all in all.....Im not really Impressed. Sorry, Try editing It. We need more clans anyways. Why not try and make the clan better, because if it can just do a few tricks with chakra and do Fuuton jutsus without handsigns It's pretty lame =/

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PostSubject: Re: [ Takayasu ]   Sat Apr 24, 2010 2:33 pm

[Edited]

But I didn't want to GodMod too much because Chakra is a pretty hard mastery...
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PostSubject: Re: [ Takayasu ]   Sat Apr 24, 2010 2:40 pm

I'm still not feeling it, It looks likes It's basically an add on to strenghten your abilities.

It's all up to konton, He's basically tie breaker
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PostSubject: Re: [ Takayasu ]   Sat Apr 24, 2010 3:05 pm

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PostSubject: Re: [ Takayasu ]   Sat Apr 24, 2010 4:08 pm

But the things this clan is starting small and won't have too many tricks nor abilitys. It'll get stronger over a dual period of time. So it's easier for it to build to have a history and get known through out the shinobi world.
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PostSubject: Re: [ Takayasu ]   Sat Apr 24, 2010 4:20 pm

I doubt thats the case since in the clans primary ability you added just as much as the uchiha clan. It would be alright if the clan had a special ability to them. Take other clans for example.

Kumori can control shadows, have a special chakra called "Shadow chakra"

Toushiro can control a special element no other clan can, Ice and an enhance its strength by adding their chakra into it.

Uchiha have the sharingan and can copy jutsus and dodge attacks by looking at their muscle movements before they even move.

Also take clans from the actual show. The Inuzaki clan is known for their mastery of Dog training. Dogs fighting alongside ninjas.

Hyuuga, Aburame, Akimichi...They are all pretty unique

and in your description for the clan there are things ninjas can already do anyways

"Control chakra?" obviously every ninja can do this.
"The ability to sense others chakra?" Same as above.
"The ability to draw chakra into a specific point" ....Need I say more?
Thing is this clan is not very creative.

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PostSubject: Re: [ Takayasu ]   Sat Apr 24, 2010 4:47 pm

Since when can anyone sense/detect someone by their chakra.

I'll start from strach later then..
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PostSubject: Re: [ Takayasu ]   Sat Apr 24, 2010 4:54 pm

If you have ever seen the anime or read the manga you will see that they point it out several times. On another note pleas go ahead and try for another clan since we need more anyways.

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