Naruto-Tenshoku rp
Welcome to Naruto Tenshoku, would you like to continue on your path of the ninja if So please LOG IN. If you are beginning your long journey please register then proceed to filling out the Character template.

Naruto-Tenshoku rp

Create you own Ninja path.
 
HomeHome  Portal*Portal*  CalendarCalendar  FAQFAQ  SearchSearch  MemberlistMemberlist  UsergroupsUsergroups  RegisterRegister  Log in  
Latest topics
» TO THE FORMER MEMBERS THIS IS KON
Mon Jun 04, 2012 12:34 am by Konton Reborn

» Long time no see
Sat Apr 14, 2012 10:59 am by Kinai Uchiha

» The Tenshoku Mandate II
Sat Mar 10, 2012 11:31 am by Kagai Gotsume

» Kurosu Uchiha
Sat Nov 12, 2011 1:06 am by Kurosu Uchiha

» Kinai's sites
Tue May 17, 2011 5:59 pm by Kinai Uchiha

» To those who still check in on the site.
Sun May 15, 2011 10:16 pm by Kinai Uchiha

» chanel handbags
Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:55 am by fenglingling

» Ryu Uchiha
Sat Aug 07, 2010 9:22 pm by Ryu Uchiha

» Rebirth Of Dark Naruto 2
Fri Jul 23, 2010 9:23 pm by Kinai Uchiha

Kages

Share | 
 

 Shadow Kumori

Go down 
AuthorMessage
Shadow Kumori
Kumori
Kumori
avatar

Money : 0
Posts : 225
Reputation : 0
Join date : 2010-01-30
Age : 31
Location : where ever my lord needs me

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Shadow Kumori   Sat Apr 10, 2010 8:26 pm

Name of Character: Shadow Kumori
Village: N.S.E
Desired Bloodline (If Any): Kumori
Age of character: 23
Goals: To end the war one way or the other.
Likes: Blades, knifes, and anything sharp.
Dislikes: Blunt.
Background: Shadow was born during the war and was trained to survive no matter what, he was part of a teem of new type of ninja that have been genetically altered so they can turn in to demon like animals but most went insane and where killed by there own but shadow was trained so that he can us his animal form with out going insane but he was just as cruel as they all were but he dident kill his opponent he shredded them to pieces giveing him the nickname the crimson blade wolf but one day he was saved by a enemy nin after being deadly wounded and the nin told him "there is more ways to win a war then just slaughtering your enemy" from that day he has never kill his opponent's, now and days he works right under the Kumori clan leader and teaches new genin.
Personality: Calm, cold, but kind
RP Sample: {ever body knows}


Last edited by Shadow Kumori on Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:11 pm; edited 6 times in total
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Chris Toushiro
Toushiro
Toushiro
avatar

Money : 300
Posts : 248
Reputation : 2
Join date : 2010-03-21
Age : 22
Location : Shinobi Teikoku-Azuma (Shinobi Empire-East) ( 東 )

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Sat Apr 10, 2010 8:30 pm

okay i am not an admin but i have to say something, at least as a mod. I dont remember you ever asking anyone if you can be a genetically altered demon animal. Dont misunderstand, sorry if I sound like i'm being mean, I'm not. I'm just saying you have to get permission for that sort of thing =/
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Shadow Kumori
Kumori
Kumori
avatar

Money : 0
Posts : 225
Reputation : 0
Join date : 2010-01-30
Age : 31
Location : where ever my lord needs me

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Sat Apr 10, 2010 8:35 pm

I know i asked and they said that konton has last say
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Kinai Uchiha
Uchiha
Uchiha
avatar

Money : 0
Posts : 173
Reputation : 0
Join date : 2009-09-06
Age : 23

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Sun Apr 11, 2010 4:26 pm

yea and i thought baikou disapproved of that and too tell you the truth dude if i know kon he will disapprove of it because it seems god modish
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Shadow Kumori
Kumori
Kumori
avatar

Money : 0
Posts : 225
Reputation : 0
Join date : 2010-01-30
Age : 31
Location : where ever my lord needs me

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Sun Apr 11, 2010 4:55 pm

all the animal form dus it mack the user faster or stronger and mack them look like a demon like animal thats all
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Chris Toushiro
Toushiro
Toushiro
avatar

Money : 300
Posts : 248
Reputation : 2
Join date : 2010-03-21
Age : 22
Location : Shinobi Teikoku-Azuma (Shinobi Empire-East) ( 東 )

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:05 pm

oh, well thats not really that bad =/ still i guess it all matters on an administraters opinion
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Konton
Kumori
Kumori
avatar

Money : 0
Posts : 1033
Reputation : 1
Join date : 2009-07-10
Location : Kumogakure

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:36 pm

I'm going to have to disapprove. Maybe this can happen to your character in the plot (doubtfully) But in all honesty if you get this it will lead to new members thinking its something you can start out with and lead to god moding issues in the future. Sorry.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Shadow Kumori
Kumori
Kumori
avatar

Money : 0
Posts : 225
Reputation : 0
Join date : 2010-01-30
Age : 31
Location : where ever my lord needs me

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:42 pm

ok i know what if it was a jutsu that only can be taught by one who knows it ?
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Konton
Kumori
Kumori
avatar

Money : 0
Posts : 1033
Reputation : 1
Join date : 2009-07-10
Location : Kumogakure

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:44 pm

like a full wolf transformation?
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Shadow Kumori
Kumori
Kumori
avatar

Money : 0
Posts : 225
Reputation : 0
Join date : 2010-01-30
Age : 31
Location : where ever my lord needs me

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:46 pm

no, more like hafe wolf
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Konton
Kumori
Kumori
avatar

Money : 0
Posts : 1033
Reputation : 1
Join date : 2009-07-10
Location : Kumogakure

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:51 pm

In all honesty I don't like the idea.
But, I have no reason to deny.
When baikou get on message him and dicuss it.
There is nothing godmodish about a transformation and speed boost if distibuted carefully.
I'm just not to fond of it. So instead of being biased get his opinion.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Shadow Kumori
Kumori
Kumori
avatar

Money : 0
Posts : 225
Reputation : 0
Join date : 2010-01-30
Age : 31
Location : where ever my lord needs me

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:55 pm

ok but besides that is everthing else ok
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Konton
Kumori
Kumori
avatar

Money : 0
Posts : 1033
Reputation : 1
Join date : 2009-07-10
Location : Kumogakure

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Sun Apr 11, 2010 6:14 pm

yeah besides that it looks fine.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Shadow Kumori
Kumori
Kumori
avatar

Money : 0
Posts : 225
Reputation : 0
Join date : 2010-01-30
Age : 31
Location : where ever my lord needs me

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Sun Apr 11, 2010 6:20 pm

ok cool
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Raiga Uchiha
Uchiha
Uchiha
avatar

Money : 5600
Posts : 755
Reputation : 0
Join date : 2009-07-15
Location : Nyu-Konohagakure

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Sun Apr 11, 2010 6:35 pm

I'd say No. You can have heightened agility and strength, but wolf transformation just seems to "Twilight-ish"
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.facebook.com/home.php#!/profile.php?id=1787475160
Shadow Kumori
Kumori
Kumori
avatar

Money : 0
Posts : 225
Reputation : 0
Join date : 2010-01-30
Age : 31
Location : where ever my lord needs me

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Sun Apr 11, 2010 6:40 pm

NO Twilight like! it is much diffrent, i have a pic

Spoiler:
 
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Raiga Uchiha
Uchiha
Uchiha
avatar

Money : 5600
Posts : 755
Reputation : 0
Join date : 2009-07-15
Location : Nyu-Konohagakure

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Sun Apr 11, 2010 6:45 pm

Make the jutsu - give me some time to think. I'd suggest using the jutsu once per day, and at night as it's restrictions.
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.facebook.com/home.php#!/profile.php?id=1787475160
Shadow Kumori
Kumori
Kumori
avatar

Money : 0
Posts : 225
Reputation : 0
Join date : 2010-01-30
Age : 31
Location : where ever my lord needs me

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Sun Apr 11, 2010 6:46 pm

ok i can work with that
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Shadow Kumori
Kumori
Kumori
avatar

Money : 0
Posts : 225
Reputation : 0
Join date : 2010-01-30
Age : 31
Location : where ever my lord needs me

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Thu Apr 22, 2010 4:58 pm

NEW!

Character Name: Shadow Kumori

Desired Bloodline: Kumori

Desired Starting elements: Shadow, Lighting, Wind.

Desired Village: West empire.

Age: 23

Desired Rank: Jounin.

Appearance: Pic.

Personality: Shadow is a come and kind person but was ones a verey cruel, blood thirsty warrior from the war but now he has become a good fun loveing person.

Background information: Shadow was born during the war and was trained to survive no matter what, he was part of a teem of new type of ninja that have been genetically altered so they can turn in to demon like animals that where like robots and that killed with out hesitation but most went insane and where killed by there own but shadow was trained so that he can us his animal form with out going insane but he was just as cruel as they all were but he dident kill his opponent he shredded them to pieces giveing him the nickname the crimson blade demon but one day he was saved by a enemy nin after being deadly wounded and the nin told him "there is more ways to win a war then just slaughtering your enemy" from that day he has never kill his opponent's, now and days he works right under the Kumori clan leader and teaches new genin.

Special: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu.

Rp Sample: {Im to lazy to do this}
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Konton
Kumori
Kumori
avatar

Money : 0
Posts : 1033
Reputation : 1
Join date : 2009-07-10
Location : Kumogakure

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Thu Apr 22, 2010 5:42 pm

Two problems with this.
1 Shadow is not a chakra you may replace it.
2 in order to have a high rank a rp sample is required. That's the rules.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Chris Toushiro
Toushiro
Toushiro
avatar

Money : 300
Posts : 248
Reputation : 2
Join date : 2010-03-21
Age : 22
Location : Shinobi Teikoku-Azuma (Shinobi Empire-East) ( 東 )

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Thu Apr 22, 2010 10:36 pm

background has to be longer as well.

- - - - -
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Raiga Uchiha
Uchiha
Uchiha
avatar

Money : 5600
Posts : 755
Reputation : 0
Join date : 2009-07-15
Location : Nyu-Konohagakure

Character sheet
Eye sight:
100/100  (100/100)
Life:
100/100  (100/100)
Items:

PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   Thu Apr 22, 2010 10:53 pm

4)
Spoiler:
 
- that's a really long frickin' sentence. You might want to try using some periods and/or commas in there.


...Actually Chris, it said 7 lines, and that's pretty much 7 lines.

- - - - -
~~ Master of the Sharingan and the 5 Elements ~~

Spoiler:
 
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.facebook.com/home.php#!/profile.php?id=1787475160
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: Shadow Kumori   

Back to top Go down
 
Shadow Kumori
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Naruto-Tenshoku rp :: Creation Station :: Character Creation-
Jump to: